Conquistadors:
Conquistadors are people who went to conquear Mexico. They have muskets and horses. They are very powerful and invanced. They are humans, which here for treasure and gold. Their reliegon is monotheistic. They pull thier ships on the beach and scupper them, so they cant escape.
Aztecs:
There was people who came in our land. they were called the conquistadors. They had sticks with fire, and they ride deer. They sacrafice people, and they are here for revenge. Our religion is Polytheistic but thier religion is Monotheistic. They say about us that we have amazing stone building. I am afrain that those people want to conquear Mexico
Conquistadors are people who went to conquear Mexico. They have muskets and horses. They are very powerful and invanced. They are humans, which here for treasure and gold. Their reliegon is monotheistic. They pull thier ships on the beach and scupper them, so they cant escape.
Aztecs:
There was people who came in our land. they were called the conquistadors. They had sticks with fire, and they ride deer. They sacrafice people, and they are here for revenge. Our religion is Polytheistic but thier religion is Monotheistic. They say about us that we have amazing stone building. I am afrain that those people want to conquear Mexico
30/50 - Some good points but lacks background. Try to avoid listing all the main points. Instead create a story around which you can add the information above.
ReplyDeleteYou were also supposed to focus on one point of view.
T - background to fill in.